---Fire Heats Balloon

fire heats balloon
punctuates the morning sky…
many moons aglow
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brown Avatar
January 14, 2011 at 4:10 AM
Congratulations Deborah on your win in SKAT*'s contest "Air Balloon Ride". Love, Carol
Poet Avatar
January 10, 2011 at 11:24 PM
Congratulations Deborah on your win in the contest!Enjoyed your Haiku-kashinath
A   Avatar
January 10, 2011 at 6:13 PM
Deborah,, Congratulations in the contest. enjoyed,..p.d.
Fraser Avatar
January 10, 2011 at 1:04 PM
Many congratulations Deborah on your fine win in Skat's contest....:)
Kendrick Avatar
January 10, 2011 at 9:48 AM
Congratulations on your win with this very imaginative work..Sara
Mehta Avatar
January 10, 2011 at 7:47 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contetst of Skat, Deb
Dietrich Avatar
January 10, 2011 at 7:25 AM
Deb, I really enjoyed this one. soupmail
Neels Avatar
January 10, 2011 at 3:38 AM
Congratulations on your win in Irma's contest ;-)
Onclaud Avatar
January 10, 2011 at 12:19 AM
i'm so loving this, deborah! my special cheers for your great win in this vontest! :) nette
Sweetheart Avatar
January 9, 2011 at 11:57 PM
Congrats TEACH on your winning poem in Irma's hot air balloon contest .. luv the flow of this one Debbie and great win for u to enjoy with luv my friend.. pupil..in luv..
A  Avatar
January 9, 2011 at 10:31 PM
DEBORAH, CONGRATULATIONS!! ON YOUR WONDERFUL HOT AIR-BALLOON RIDE. HAD LOTS OF FUN READING EVERY ENTRY. THANK YOU~(( THIS POEM WAS AWESOME BUT, I HAD A TITLE RULE..)) ~SKAT
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December 11, 2010 at 5:30 PM
As usual, headmistress, you come in with a top notch entry. Nicely imagined, this, and I like the cut. Congratulations on your wins. They are reealizing like the Academy that which I already knew- you are one of THE best. Period. End of discussion. Berst wishes always from Gerard.
Kopp Avatar
December 10, 2010 at 9:39 AM
Good luck in the balloon contest and thanks for your kind comments on my post
Mannan Avatar
December 9, 2010 at 7:56 PM
What afantastic play on words. All the best for the contest.
M V Avatar
December 9, 2010 at 7:49 PM
Debora,this is sweet and tells a lot.A great haiku
Dietrich Avatar
December 9, 2010 at 7:15 PM
oh, and I just caught the play on words, moons aglow for AGO. Good one!
Dietrich Avatar
December 9, 2010 at 7:14 PM
OOOH, awasome second line there. Punctuates the sky. Luv it!
Sweetheart Avatar
December 9, 2010 at 6:29 PM
Perfect piece TEACH... god luck in the contest... visual effects are grand luv.. SOUP MAIL...
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