Fire Down Below - Haiku Contest

Sky is burning red Looks like heaven is on fire…. Clouds like puffs of steam
Sky reaches to earth… As the red glow emulates Through fiery trees
Nature at it’s best Vibrant picture pains the eyes… Scene like burning hell
penned 20 August 2015
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Dietrich Avatar
August 27, 2015 at 3:59 PM
very FIERY, Seren. You did very well showing the flames of a red sunset sky!
Roberts Avatar
August 27, 2015 at 5:56 PM
The sky must have been sunny here it warmed me up lol....Seren
Sathasivam Avatar
August 20, 2015 at 8:06 AM
Lovely haiku. Well expressed. All the best for the contest. TFS
Roberts Avatar
August 27, 2015 at 5:57 PM
Hello Ravi, nice to see you, thanks for leaving a comment....Seren
Allison Avatar
August 20, 2015 at 5:11 AM
such a vivid string of haiku Seren good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
Roberts Avatar
August 20, 2015 at 8:02 AM
hi glad you liked it .....Seren
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