Fire Birds

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Fire birds with no life fly above our heads ~wings without long warm feathers sheltered deep in a hole~

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Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 11/5/2023 6:43:00 PM

Great kimo about "...firebirds with no life..." nice one Maria! :)

Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 11/6/2023 1:23:00 AM

Hi Linda. Thank you very much for your kind comment. Have a great weekxxx

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 10/27/2023 3:11:00 AM

Wonder what will be their destiny. Great imagery. Blessings.

Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 10/27/2023 4:41:00 AM

Me too Victor. Thanks a lot. Blessings!

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 10/25/2023 3:34:00 PM

a delightful Kimo, Maria. I feel for the fire birds with their wings without long warm feathers. Have a pleasant evening and thanks for stopping by and visiting my poems. Sara

Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 10/25/2023 3:39:00 PM

Hey Sara, I like to pass by and learning from you. Thanks for being there all the time. I really appreciate all your comments and I admire you very muchxxx Love Maria