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Fire and Water


From flow to flow, two
Classical elements meet.
Eclipsed by the sky

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May 25, 2010 at 1:43 PM

Interesting perspective with much for the reader to reflect on. Congratulations on your win in the contest. Way to go! Wishing you ongoing success with your writing. Thank you for your kind comment. Karen

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

May 24, 2010 at 8:18 PM

Congrats James on your HM in the Blind Faith contest with these words of Haiku so special... great depiction of the photo which was spectacular and a wonderful honor for your talent..my friend..with luv. from the "Sweetheart"

Lynette Chachere

May 24, 2010 at 7:38 AM

sounds cool. the entwining of fire and water. two of many differences, but almost with the same force. -Always&Forever Lynette

Andrea Dietrich

May 23, 2010 at 3:55 PM

wow, is this one to go with that blind faith picture? It sure looks that way. I really like this one, James.

Carolyn Devonshire

May 22, 2010 at 1:44 PM

The joining of the sea and sky are beautifully painted in your words, James. Very nice interpretation of the photo. Best wishes in the contest! Love, Carolyn