Fire and Water

From flow to flow, two Classical elements meet. Eclipsed by the sky

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Date: 5/25/2010 1:43:00 PM

Interesting perspective with much for the reader to reflect on. Congratulations on your win in the contest. Way to go! Wishing you ongoing success with your writing. Thank you for your kind comment. Karen

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/24/2010 8:18:00 PM

Congrats James on your HM in the Blind Faith contest with these words of Haiku so special... great depiction of the photo which was spectacular and a wonderful honor for your talent..my friend..with luv. from the "Sweetheart"

Lynette Chachere

Date: 5/24/2010 7:38:00 AM

sounds cool. the entwining of fire and water. two of many differences, but almost with the same force. -Always&Forever Lynette

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/23/2010 3:55:00 PM

wow, is this one to go with that blind faith picture? It sure looks that way. I really like this one, James.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/22/2010 1:44:00 PM

The joining of the sea and sky are beautifully painted in your words, James. Very nice interpretation of the photo. Best wishes in the contest! Love, Carolyn

Satin Doll Diva

Date: 5/22/2010 1:20:00 PM

A very beautiful Haiku Mr. James and wish you much success... you are so sweet and funny and I appreciate your welcome comments ..Satin Doll Diva

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 5/22/2010 9:59:00 AM

Very nice haiku, and your last line sure brought it together! :)