Michael J. Falotico Poet Couplet

Fire and Sweet

The fire is burning where water can't reach...
                                    Our bodies are in tangles to where our lips meet...

                                Smoke has filled the room as the flames cascade high...
                                        A bed filled with passion as two lovers fly...

                                      Our words are drenched with juices so sweet...
                                          Ice cubes dissolve on skin laced in heat...
 
                                      I crawl to the spicket for just a drop to refresh...
                                       And then back to fire where I do feel blessed...


dedicated to my one and only
     ~Rosanna~

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Dinda Minardi May 7, 2012 at 8:19 AM A very sweet, sexy and charming poem, Michael. Enjoyed every words you chose. :)

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl May 7, 2012 at 7:06 AM Lucky girl xx

Harry Horsman May 7, 2012 at 2:06 AM hot one here, Michael, enjoyed this wonderful poem. such a awesome tribute to Rosanna. harry

Elliott Bowe The Drunken Poet May 7, 2012 at 1:57 AM Superb write dear poet,I enjoyed this much.

Shirley Long May 6, 2012 at 10:54 PM This is a well-written poem filled with much love and joy, I enjoyed reading every captivating verse in it, the verses are electrifying and delightful, good write.

Deborah Burch May 6, 2012 at 9:52 PM Ok...*whew* I can't read many more of these passionate poems tonite...lol this is a fabulous write for Rosanna!! What a wonderful tribute to her!! :) but you guys gotta cut an ole girl some slack and rate these things so I can plan ahead :O LOL *blush* I'm lookin for a fan now...;) big hugs,love to you and Roseanna! :)

Debra Squyres May 6, 2012 at 6:00 PM such passion !!

Pace Ink-U-Script May 6, 2012 at 5:58 PM nice piece Mike!!

John Rhinem May 6, 2012 at 5:38 PM Ps. Smile ˜ "Come Here Baby, 'Kissss Me With Your Soft Sweeet Lips.'" *

Good Night May 6, 2012 at 5:27 PM really good poem everyone on this site is really talented i rate this one a 7

David Williams May 6, 2012 at 3:34 PM Michael. I love it. if my barbi gets cool I know where to get it fired back up, well done my friend...hope things are getting sorted..David Michael J. Falotico May 6, 2012 at 4:17 PM We are all puzzle pieces my friend , some fit some don't. Lol

John Rhinem May 6, 2012 at 2:45 PM Smile ˜ Boy If I Were A Girl, I Would Probably Find Myself Thinking Bad Thoughts, My Dear Sweeet Beautiful Michael * I Can See The Steam Rising & I Think, Wow ˜ My Love, Forever; John!:) ˜ May 6, 2012 at 4:34 PM ...."Your Welcome, 'My Beautiful Michaela.'" * Michael J. Falotico May 6, 2012 at 3:33 PM Thank you John!! May 6, 2012 at 2:48 PM ...."A Burning Hot Favourite, 'Amid Flames Of Beauty.'" *

Anne-Lise Andresen May 6, 2012 at 2:41 PM Lucky Rosanna....so beautiful poem Michael!! - oxox (love) Anne-Lise Michael J. Falotico May 6, 2012 at 3:34 PM ok what time does Arild go to sleep?? lol May 6, 2012 at 2:50 PM ...."Yesss, 'Absolutely.'" *

Wilma Neels May 6, 2012 at 2:38 PM You are truly blessed Michael.. Loaded with passion for sure. A gem of a dedication to Rosanna.. Had to laugh at Gwen's comment.. Hugs ;-) CTC Michael J. Falotico May 6, 2012 at 2:41 PM Ok Gwen , I'm on the red ye... again lol

Gwendolen Song May 6, 2012 at 2:33 PM Now fly over to my home and give my spouse some poetry lessons!!! Hurry Michael, he has ten months til the next Valentine's Day! This poem is smokin' hot with a dedicated passion! She is a lucky gal! :) Gwendolen

Michael J. Falotico May 6, 2012 at 2:26 PM Thank you Gail!! She inspired it and is it... luv n hugs to you always... Michael