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Placed 2nd in Miranda Hawley's Personification of Elements Contest September 23, 2023

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I thought I’d have to leave my favored spot and go inside this warm and humid day. My pleas for respite must have been perceived, for Nature sent a lilting, soothing breeze. My car took out the worst day of the year. I shivered violently while trudging home. Then, welcomed by my loving family and fireplace flames, I felt so richly blessed. But Nature’s Air and Fire aren’t always mild. When they unite, they devastate with fear, destruction, and dismay. Wildfires will spread, for many miles encouraged by high winds, destroying lives and homes. Recovery will come quite slowly, if it comes at all.

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Date: 9/23/2023 7:54:00 PM
Ah you seem to be describing the burning down of a house. While that is a tragic event, it was an excellent way to talk about fire and air for the contest. Congrats on your win.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 9/24/2023 12:31:00 PM
Miranda, thanks so much. I am pleased with my win. Janice
Date: 9/6/2023 9:19:00 AM
Many beautiful things can become destructive given the right conditions as we recently saw.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 9/8/2023 6:10:00 AM
So true, Kim. Thanks. Janice
Date: 9/5/2023 4:53:00 PM
You highlight the blessings and curses of nature mainstays nicely janice
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 9/8/2023 6:11:00 AM
Thanks so much, Tom. Janice

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