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Placed 2nd in Miranda Hawley's Personification of Elements Contest September 23, 2023

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Fire and Air

I thought I’d have to leave my favored spot
and go inside this warm and humid day.
My pleas for respite must have been perceived,
for Nature sent a lilting, soothing breeze.

My car took out the worst day of the year. 
I shivered violently while trudging home.
Then, welcomed by my loving family
and fireplace flames, I felt so richly blessed.

But Nature’s Air and Fire aren’t always mild.
When they unite, they devastate with fear,
destruction, and dismay. Wildfires will spread,
for many miles encouraged by high winds, 
destroying lives and homes. Recovery
will come quite slowly, if it comes at all.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Hawley Avatar
September 23, 2023 at 7:54 PM
Ah you seem to be describing the burning down of a house. While that is a tragic event, it was an excellent way to talk about fire and air for the contest. Congrats on your win.
Canerdy Avatar
September 24, 2023 at 12:31 PM
Miranda, thanks so much. I am pleased with my win. Janice
Rodrigues Avatar
September 6, 2023 at 9:19 AM
Many beautiful things can become destructive given the right conditions as we recently saw.
Canerdy Avatar
September 8, 2023 at 6:10 AM
So true, Kim. Thanks. Janice
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