Fire

she moves

her body

like fire

in slow motion


like fire

that dances

so slowly you

want to touch it


touch so badly

you don’t care

if you are burned

by the heat


of her fire
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Gupta Avatar
December 28, 2016 at 3:50 AM
Metaphoric beauty ... does not deserve the fire ...
Pasky Avatar
December 28, 2016 at 10:30 AM
Thank you so much for taking time to read and comment.
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