Fire

Free, at last, from the life of ire
Ignited her misery with his pyre—
Reeking of her husband of years,
Embers cooling slowly like her tears.

Married a lad so handsome and young,
Sweet as sorbet on a fevered tongue.
Two lovely kids their love did bring,
A boy and a girl, livelier than any spring.

Cursed was the day he took to alcohol,
The thirst engulfing him beyond control.
Sleeping when inebriated, angry when awake,
Their smiles, his life and blood, the bottle did take.

Today she yielded him to the hungry flames aplenty,
Hand in hand with kids, to a life, better, but little empty.

Written on 05/02/2016
Honorable Mention in contest "Fire"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Kimathi Avatar
May 6, 2016 at 11:34 AM
Congrats Sara, for your placement with this awesome piece!! ;-)
Chansarkar Avatar
May 6, 2016 at 12:08 PM
Thanks for reading,Teddy!
Rodrigues Avatar
May 4, 2016 at 5:09 PM
Congrats!
Chansarkar Avatar
May 5, 2016 at 10:50 AM
Thanks Kim!
Misra Avatar
May 4, 2016 at 11:54 AM
Congrats, Sara, on your win. This is reality you've described.
Chansarkar Avatar
May 5, 2016 at 10:50 AM
Thanks Karan!
Davey Avatar
May 4, 2016 at 4:12 AM
Such a sad story of a hard life lived with a hard man! Even in the end he still had a grip on her poor soul with her empty feelings. Congrats on your HM in my Fire contest
Chansarkar Avatar
May 4, 2016 at 9:05 AM
Thanks Brian!
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