Fire

fire,


Big and small fires flame
Burnt ‘scents’ fill outward borders
With cinder filled breezes
They who ‘touch’ a fire gets burned
Be very careful to confine!
…. didee© Tanka
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Oule Avatar
September 14, 2015 at 9:38 AM
Elegant Poem Loved
Allison Avatar
September 12, 2015 at 12:45 PM
Such a vivid write Diane my heart goes out to anyone affected by these fires:-( hugs JAN XX
Quinlan Avatar
September 12, 2015 at 2:36 PM
Thanks for visiting....My sister lives in Calgary Alberta and for awhile the air has been full of smoke from the drifting in from the fires in Western coast areas. Allergy alerting went into affect! The air was so polluted.....didee
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