Fire

fire, Big and small fires flame Burnt ‘scents’ fill outward borders With cinder filled breezes They who ‘touch’ a fire gets burned Be very careful to confine! …. didee© Tanka

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Emmanuel Brian Oule

Date: 9/14/2015 9:38:00 AM

Elegant Poem Loved

Jan Allison

Date: 9/12/2015 12:45:00 PM

Such a vivid write Diane my heart goes out to anyone affected by these fires:-( hugs JAN XX

Diane M Quinlan
Date: 9/12/2015 2:36:00 PM

Thanks for visiting....My sister lives in Calgary Alberta and for awhile the air has been full of smoke from the drifting in from the fires in Western coast areas. Allergy alerting went into affect! The air was so polluted.....didee