Fire

Strangers touching in the darkness        Exploring unknown territories         At 
first        The drum is slowing beating        Faster and faster        The rythym of 
pounding flesh       Screams of delight      Echo through the dark       Drums 
pounding          Music blaring        At a feverish pitch       Two souls are engulfed 
in flames        Music stops       And once more they are mere mortals       Once 
again

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Date: 12/10/2013 4:14:00 AM
Congrats on the win, richard
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Date: 12/9/2013 5:43:00 PM
Richard, , Thanks for understanding and having patience with me. I'm sending hugs from the bottom of my heart. I am very sorry I kept all my winning poems on standby. LOL, Had a MAD headache. wink! wink! .... Congratulations.... If you have time, please enjoy my Hot & Cute blog.. Called. "Fire Sister." take care and enjoy this win -- xox.LINDA
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Richard Ferry
Date: 12/9/2013 8:52:00 PM
Thanks for placing me in your contest...........Rick
Date: 11/18/2013 4:00:00 PM
HOT says Anne Lise, and she is right! I love how you ended it with the "mere mortals" again. great conclusion!!!
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Date: 11/18/2013 11:13:00 PM
Glad you like
Date: 11/16/2013 4:36:00 PM
... Hot ::: romantic and beautiful, Richard. - Well done! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/16/2013 4:51:00 PM
Glad I could get your attention...Thanks for the comment....Rick
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