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Strangers touching in the darkness Exploring unknown territories At first The drum is slowing beating Faster and faster The rythym of pounding flesh Screams of delight Echo through the dark Drums pounding Music blaring At a feverish pitch Two souls are engulfed in flames Music stops And once more they are mere mortals Once again

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 12/10/2013 4:14:00 AM
Congrats on the win, richard
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Date: 12/9/2013 5:43:00 PM
Richard, , Thanks for understanding and having patience with me. I'm sending hugs from the bottom of my heart. I am very sorry I kept all my winning poems on standby. LOL, Had a MAD headache. wink! wink! .... Congratulations.... If you have time, please enjoy my Hot & Cute blog.. Called. "Fire Sister." take care and enjoy this win -- xox.LINDA
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Richard Ferry
Date: 12/9/2013 8:52:00 PM
Thanks for placing me in your contest...........Rick
Date: 11/18/2013 4:00:00 PM
HOT says Anne Lise, and she is right! I love how you ended it with the "mere mortals" again. great conclusion!!!
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Richard Ferry
Date: 11/18/2013 11:13:00 PM
Glad you like
Date: 11/16/2013 4:36:00 PM
... Hot ::: romantic and beautiful, Richard. - Well done! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Richard Ferry
Date: 11/16/2013 4:51:00 PM
Glad I could get your attention...Thanks for the comment....Rick

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