Fire

Hot,
blazing
no control
watch memories.
Fading away and crumble to the ground.
No stopping the flames destroy your world.
Lonely and scared
mad upset
confused
lost.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 7/11/2011 11:26:00 AM
a very wonderful poem you wrote Cory.
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Date: 7/11/2011 8:38:00 AM
descriptive phrases blazing this page, cory... lovely! :) huggs, nette
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Date: 7/11/2011 7:32:00 AM
yes, i am good and back.. Thanks for stopping by... gosh i have lots to catch up on... This has deep fired emotions... enjoyed,..p.d.
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Date: 7/10/2011 7:37:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your work....have had friends that lost their homes it is so scary.
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Date: 7/10/2011 5:53:00 PM
Is this about the fires out west?..I have seen some on TV on the news or weather channel..Sad that this is happening..Your presence at my work was uplifting...Sara
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Date: 7/10/2011 3:11:00 PM
Excellent description not only of the fire, but also the manner in which it affects people who've lost their homes. Great writing, Cory! Love, arolyn
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Date: 7/10/2011 1:13:00 PM
dynamic words with great visuals cory.. great if for a contest luv..good luck..have to check out Nette's now..
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Date: 7/10/2011 1:04:00 PM
I have never experienced anything like this,traumatic.Was this recent? Thank you for your kind comment amnd marking on my poem " Spiritual Feelings " bless up.
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Cory Long
Date: 7/10/2011 2:12:00 PM
It was October of 96 I was 15 and lost everything that night.
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