Fire

Hot, blazing no control watch memories. Fading away and crumble to the ground. No stopping the flames destroy your world. Lonely and scared mad upset confused lost.

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James Foulk

Date: 7/11/2011 11:26:00 AM

a very wonderful poem you wrote Cory.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/11/2011 8:38:00 AM

descriptive phrases blazing this page, cory... lovely! :) huggs, nette

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/11/2011 7:32:00 AM

yes, i am good and back.. Thanks for stopping by... gosh i have lots to catch up on... This has deep fired emotions... enjoyed,..p.d.

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 7/10/2011 7:37:00 PM

Enjoyed reading your work....have had friends that lost their homes it is so scary.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/10/2011 5:53:00 PM

Is this about the fires out west?..I have seen some on TV on the news or weather channel..Sad that this is happening..Your presence at my work was uplifting...Sara

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 7/10/2011 3:11:00 PM

Excellent description not only of the fire, but also the manner in which it affects people who've lost their homes. Great writing, Cory! Love, arolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/10/2011 1:13:00 PM

dynamic words with great visuals cory.. great if for a contest luv..good luck..have to check out Nette's now..

Paul Beadnall

Date: 7/10/2011 1:04:00 PM

I have never experienced anything like this,traumatic.Was this recent? Thank you for your kind comment amnd marking on my poem " Spiritual Feelings " bless up.

Cory Long
Date: 7/10/2011 2:12:00 PM

It was October of 96 I was 15 and lost everything that night.