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As the candle fire dances My tears flow as if the melted wax was burning me Hypnotized by the passion in its movement To the beauty in its many colors The flame leaps high Than rests really low Being fondled by the nights cool breeze Moving like it had known that this was its last dance Suddenly the flame goes from light to darkness Now tell me this I know the fire is gone But when will it dance for me again?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Date: 5/29/2011 8:26:00 AM
The use of candle flame to express a lost gave this poem its outstanding imageries! I enjoy reading your poems.*hugs* Joseph
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Date: 5/25/2011 2:50:00 PM
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Date: 5/24/2011 5:12:00 PM
NICE VISUALS..."The flame leaps high".....LOVED IT!
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Date: 5/23/2011 8:24:00 PM
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Date: 5/23/2011 8:22:00 PM
As soon as you join the lightand wick. Once again great write.
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