Fire

Fire Blazing like an eclipse, drenched in red-hot blood. Blazing sword, arching upwards in the daylight. Bird wings like fire and gold Feathers fall like blazing hot snow. Little flickering light in the darkness Smoke hurdles up Blocking out the moon. The blazing star that is life So hot Never dying. Because when a star dies, it leaves a lasting impact on its universe. Stardust falls. Fire. Blaze in the void. Forever.

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Beata Agustin

Date: 9/20/2023 7:03:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.