Fire

you purify all that is encrusted bringing ashes to heaven's door you flame up and destroy you rise up then deploy; Your licking flames of red and gold, are mesmerizing me

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Sotto Poet

Date: 6/12/2023 1:17:00 PM

A magnificent poem, even surpassing Vienna. Its beauty resonates deeply as it speaks to the essential need we all have for internal purification.

Sally Eslinger

Date: 6/11/2023 8:27:00 PM

Sister, hi! I am very moved by this poem…ever since i had a dream about preparing for a bible study class & when i turned to indicate the presence of God , the place i indicated flared up in go,den flames. Very moved by your “ashes ar heaven’s door.” Your gifted voice runs all thru this. Thank you. Blessings,hugs

Stephan McBride

Date: 6/11/2023 9:14:00 AM

Beautiful poem, we all need this purification within: )

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 6/11/2023 10:00:00 AM

Yes we do dear Stephan, thank you for taking time to leave a comment today :)

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 6/11/2023 8:34:00 AM

A mesmerizing poem, Mystic Rose. Loved it.

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 6/11/2023 10:00:00 AM

Thankyou Victor glad your back and feeling better , Have a blessed Sunday !