Fire

you purify all that is encrusted 
bringing ashes to heaven's door 
you flame up and destroy 
you rise up then deploy;  
Your licking flames of red and gold, 
are mesmerizing me
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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June 12, 2023 at 1:17 PM
A magnificent poem, even surpassing Vienna. Its beauty resonates deeply as it speaks to the essential need we all have for internal purification.
Eslinger Avatar
June 11, 2023 at 8:27 PM
Sister, hi! I am very moved by this poem…ever since i had a dream about preparing for a bible study class & when i turned to indicate the presence of God , the place i indicated flared up in go,den flames. Very moved by your “ashes ar heaven’s door.” Your gifted voice runs all thru this. Thank you. Blessings,hugs
McBride  Avatar
June 11, 2023 at 9:14 AM
Beautiful poem, we all need this purification within: )
Rose  Avatar
June 11, 2023 at 10:00 AM
Yes we do dear Stephan, thank you for taking time to leave a comment today :)
Buhagiar Avatar
June 11, 2023 at 8:34 AM
A mesmerizing poem, Mystic Rose. Loved it.
Rose  Avatar
June 11, 2023 at 10:00 AM
Thankyou Victor glad your back and feeling better , Have a blessed Sunday !
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