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Written 17th August, 2026 for When the Toilet Paper Roll Is Almost Empty Poetry sponsored by Sara Kendrick

Finite Suspension

White sheets,
     Unwound by time,
         The softness strips away,
                  
                  One square,
                       Thin and so frail,
                             Clinging to cardboard bone,

                                     I sit in silent, cold despair,
                                             Until the hollow core remains,
                                                       Bare bones.
Stranded.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Goldsmith Avatar
August 29, 2026 at 2:07 PM
Congratulations on your fun win. I enjoyed reading your fun/creative write. With A Great Picture. Love Both... Have a fun weekend with your  win...............
Smith nee Howarth Avatar
August 29, 2026 at 8:32 PM
Thanks Paula❤️
Healey Avatar
August 29, 2026 at 9:55 AM
Nice double entendre. Well done.
Smith nee Howarth Avatar
August 29, 2026 at 12:10 PM
Thank you Jim.🌹
Kendrick Avatar
August 28, 2026 at 4:18 PM
I want to say I appreciate you supporting my contest by writing a poem just for it. Congratulations on your work being on the winner's list. Way to go!!👏✍️. Sara K.
Smith nee Howarth Avatar
August 28, 2026 at 7:10 PM
Thank you for your contest ... and judging. This was a interesting topic.❤️
Hind Avatar
August 18, 2026 at 6:53 PM
that end is a wow, you did a wonderful job with this contest, HAS to win "bare bones, stranded"
Smith nee Howarth Avatar
August 18, 2026 at 7:29 PM
It has that double meaning.
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