Get Your Premium Membership

Finite Life

Hungry hawk gliding, below he spots rabbit-prey; life is so finite!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 2/23/2019 6:29:00 AM
Ah, this is terrific, my friend! I am reliving some poems of yours I have missed, my friend.
Login to Reply
Kiser Avatar
M. L. Kiser
Date: 2/23/2019 8:01:00 PM
Thanks, I need to do that, as well. This year is flying by so fast that by the time I list some poetry, half of the day's gone.
Date: 5/9/2015 1:06:00 PM
I love watching programs on Wildlife and it's beauty, but it's when one views the killing to live makes me feel sad but I know it's part of the pattern of survival. Nice Haiku MLK, James :)
Login to Reply
Kiser Avatar
M. L. Kiser
Date: 5/9/2015 2:30:00 PM
Yes, sadly, survival is not easy for many. I love wildlife shows too and I'm glad you stopped by to read and comment. Thanks
Date: 4/7/2015 11:54:00 AM
Great haiku! The imagery is striking! Warmest regards. Pandita
Login to Reply
Kiser Avatar
M. L. Kiser
Date: 4/7/2015 11:38:00 PM
Thank you, Pandita
Date: 4/6/2015 6:54:00 PM
Yes, life is the way it is meant to be with or without a dark ending. I love this Haiku!
Login to Reply
Kiser Avatar
M. L. Kiser
Date: 4/7/2015 11:39:00 PM
I am glad that you enjoyed it, Maurice. Many thanks
Date: 3/26/2015 7:18:00 PM
Nice Haiku. I like the exclamation point at the end; to me it changes the point of view from just the animals to the rest of us
Login to Reply
Kiser Avatar
M. L. Kiser
Date: 4/7/2015 11:40:00 PM
Then I have accomplished my task; thanks for dropping by.
Date: 3/26/2015 5:05:00 AM
weeee so indeed we must live our life to the fullest!! we don't want to miss any!..olive eloisa
Login to Reply
Kiser Avatar
M. L. Kiser
Date: 4/7/2015 11:40:00 PM
Indeed, thanks for stopping by to read and comment.
Date: 3/24/2015 2:49:00 PM
Very nice example. Yes life is so finite. We know something, want everything and get nothing. Thank you so much.
Login to Reply
Kiser Avatar
M. L. Kiser
Date: 3/25/2015 11:10:00 AM
I agree...thanks again, Sandip.
Date: 3/24/2015 2:23:00 PM
What Matt says. Sad but true, ML!
Login to Reply
Kiser Avatar
M. L. Kiser
Date: 3/25/2015 11:10:00 AM
Many thanks, Andrea.
Date: 3/24/2015 1:33:00 PM
Sad but true. Yet I believe one can connect with the infinite if one tries hard enough. Peace & Love Matthew Anish
Login to Reply
Kiser Avatar
M. L. Kiser
Date: 3/25/2015 11:10:00 AM
Thank you, Matthew.
Date: 3/24/2015 11:59:00 AM
Oh so true! Great haiku ML-) Hugs jan xx
Login to Reply
Kiser Avatar
M. L. Kiser
Date: 3/25/2015 11:11:00 AM
Glad that you stopped by, Jan.