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Finish This Verse

Roses are red Violets are blue What will I write about I haven’t got a clue Entrant into Susan Burch's "Finish this Verse" contest 3/13/2012

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Black Eyed Susan

Date: 3/15/2012 6:04:00 PM

think you forgot to enter this :( It's not in my list of entries.

Cecilia Macfarlane

Date: 3/15/2012 5:30:00 PM

Cute! That is exactly how I felt, you read my mind, lol.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/14/2012 4:11:00 PM

we all face that question Russell .. an excellent etry to finish this verse luv.. good luck..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/14/2012 12:36:00 AM

you have not got a clue, but this sure will DO. It's just as good as almost any others I have seen, Russell. I did a bunch of these and got my friends to vote on them. But then I ended up using one that my hubbie gave me off the top of his head. It will be cool if "he" wins. hahaha.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/13/2012 6:04:00 PM

Cute finish to the poem..Good luck in the contest..Reads like a winner to me..Thanks for stopping by, reading, and commenting on my work..Sara

Don Johnson

Date: 3/13/2012 5:13:00 PM

good one Russell ..has a bit of a subtle twist, on the tail hey, well done

Jack Horne

Date: 3/13/2012 3:01:00 PM

LOL, good one - I used the word 'clue' too : )

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 3/13/2012 2:46:00 PM

silly man! The way you have the verse categories in your contest confused me at first I misslabeled maybe do it like this [dodoitsu 7/7/7/5] [kimo 10/7/6] the : you used after the type made me look at the count before the word instead of after..just trying to be of help HUGS! Light & Love

Olusegun Arowolo

Date: 3/13/2012 12:29:00 AM

Fine write,Russel.I Love ur verse esp the last line.good luck to you in the contest..

Deck Fitzgerald

Date: 3/13/2012 12:22:00 AM

A verse for a smile , nice one Russell , Declan ...

Gwendolen Song

Date: 3/12/2012 10:45:00 PM

I tho't of writing about the most amazing walk I have had in a very long time with my puppy under the night's calm sky...you should write about a walk with your pet if u have one...ha ha...Cute and quaint verse, Russell...too many contests to write for...I know this one of yours is a strong contender! Best of luck. (Isn't the Ohio weather amazing tonite?) Wow. Gwendolen