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Finish the Dream

Clasping harder I pulled, though her hand slipped away, And when I looked down, In my palm, it did lay... Left only with blood, Thickened with grief. The dream stole my heart, Nightmare was the thief... +++++++++++++++++++ Finish the Dream Contest sponsored by Matt Calari

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Date: 9/8/2015 2:05:00 PM
Judy, Congratulations on having your poem featured on the home page. **SKAT**
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Judy Konos
Date: 9/8/2015 5:22:00 PM
Thank you Boogie Woogie....
Date: 2/16/2011 3:11:00 PM
A different approach..Reads like a winner to me..Good luck..Sara
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Judy Konos
Date: 9/8/2015 5:24:00 PM
Thank you Sara...5 years have now passed since you wrote the above...so now I will stop and say thank you ...appreciate it....

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