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Fingertips

fingertips still reach
I recall when our palms touched
will we recover











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Copyright © James Fraser | Year Posted 2011

lifelost lovesenryu

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Black Eyed Susan

June 28, 2011 at 10:27 AM

So powerful! I love this! I hope this isn't a true poem about your life. Growing apart, and maybe unable to stop it, can be truly heartbreaking. tell me this isn't happening to you.

June 25, 2011 at 12:27 PM

I like to think there is always hope James :) lovely senryu and loads of smiles from me

Francine Roberts

June 24, 2011 at 5:18 PM

think my next contest will be romantic senryus, like this one maybe, hmmm theres a thought

June 24, 2011 at 5:22 PM

Francine, your contests are a joy. Once I learn to read the rules, I may enter the next one. Chuckles from I, have a lovely weekend :)

Francine Roberts

June 24, 2011 at 5:17 PM

touching senryu James

June 24, 2011 at 4:15 PM

Good Haiku..Good luck in the contest..Reads like winning material..Sara

Richard Moriarty

June 24, 2011 at 4:06 PM

I've been here, done that...wow! memories..thanks James

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