Finesse

mosquito messiah
follows feeds swallows
such needs create 
much madness
(so squint & see
the imprint it's me)
with finesse lapping
up the mess flapping
wings for the sheer 
hell of it
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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August 23, 2010 at 10:47 AM
Thank you for sharing your poetry today Rachel. It was a pleasure to read. Love, Carol
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August 22, 2010 at 10:04 AM
very interesting write... I so enjoyed your work today..always Michael
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