Charles Messina Poet Triolet

Fine Time To Write a Triolet

A year, twelve months...my fave is May 
When leaves are green and flowers bloom 
April showers have gone away 
A year, twelve months...my fave is May
Cinco De Mayo, my fave...day 
Flowers of fragrance in my room 
A year, twelve months...my fave is May
Fine time, to write...this triolet 


Celebrating May with a (Tree-O-Lay) Poetry Contest 
Sponsor Andrea Dietrich 
5-5-2019

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Indiana Shaw May 11, 2020 at 12:09 PM May is most certainly the greatest month to watch everything bloom, enjoy it while you can as June is coming soon . . . : )

Line Gauthier May 17, 2019 at 2:22 PM Fun triolet, Charles, Congrats on your win.

Charles Messina May 15, 2019 at 9:28 PM Dang, by golly I've done it again...lol I don't know how I messed that up. Anyway, thank you so much, Andrea for your kind placement. I really appreciate that. Hugs ~Charlie

Andrea Dietrich May 15, 2019 at 6:02 PM Charles, this would have scored higher with me, except you did not exactly write it correctly to form. The second line should be same as last line. Too bad about that rule, because your end line is so fantastic!! Love your poem and Congrats in my contest Charles Messina May 15, 2019 at 9:30 PM Oops, I commented to myself instead of replying to you...lol

Michelle Faulkner May 9, 2019 at 11:35 PM I think May is my favorite month, too - really like the line 'flowers in fragrance in my room' ; good luck in the contest, Charles.

Briauna Brown May 7, 2019 at 3:13 AM What a lovely way to depict the month of May! Best wishes in the triolet contest! XOXO - Briauna