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Fine Time To Write a Triolet

A year, twelve months...my fave is May When leaves are green and flowers bloom April showers have gone away A year, twelve months...my fave is May Cinco De Mayo, my fave...day Flowers of fragrance in my room A year, twelve months...my fave is May Fine time, to write...this triolet Celebrating May with a (Tree-O-Lay) Poetry Contest Sponsor Andrea Dietrich 5-5-2019

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Indiana Shaw

Date: 5/11/2020 12:09:00 PM

May is most certainly the greatest month to watch everything bloom, enjoy it while you can as June is coming soon . . . : )

Line Gauthier

Date: 5/17/2019 2:22:00 PM

Fun triolet, Charles, Congrats on your win.

Charles Messina

Date: 5/15/2019 9:28:00 PM

Dang, by golly I've done it again...lol I don't know how I messed that up. Anyway, thank you so much, Andrea for your kind placement. I really appreciate that. Hugs ~Charlie

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/15/2019 6:02:00 PM

Charles, this would have scored higher with me, except you did not exactly write it correctly to form. The second line should be same as last line. Too bad about that rule, because your end line is so fantastic!! Love your poem and Congrats in my contest

Charles Messina
Date: 5/15/2019 9:30:00 PM

Oops, I commented to myself instead of replying to you...lol

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 5/9/2019 11:35:00 PM

I think May is my favorite month, too - really like the line 'flowers in fragrance in my room' ; good luck in the contest, Charles.

Briauna Brown

Date: 5/7/2019 3:13:00 AM

What a lovely way to depict the month of May! Best wishes in the triolet contest! XOXO - Briauna