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Fine, Just Fine

You’re fine That special line you tell yourself Each and everyday Everything is great you say When reality tries to take you away You put on a show For all those around You don’t let anyone know That the only real lie you tell Is I’m fine Those thoughts you confine Grow grow and grow And you try but there is nothing you can do about it Eventually They’ll consume you Bit by bit While you sit alone Crying yourself to sleep Hoping you’ll never wake up And when you’re gone Everyone will see That when you said I’m fine You really meant “help me” ~ 3/1/2018

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 3/19/2018 5:11:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Hannah. Lots of truth in your poem.
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Date: 3/18/2018 3:49:00 AM
F..., those facades. Thank you penning it. There is a fine line between pretending and bucking oneself up. Congratulations on your win. This is a textbook poem message. Please help others and please ask for help...
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Date: 3/18/2018 2:55:00 AM
Heartfelt congratulations on your well-deserved win, Hannah - blessings and best wishes to you, friend! :-)
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Date: 3/18/2018 12:17:00 AM
I remember this one! Makes an impact! Congrats, Hannah!
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Date: 3/18/2018 12:06:00 AM
Congrats on winning! Have an amazing day! :)
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Date: 3/17/2018 7:36:00 PM
Hannah,well done and enjoyed reading.. Congratulations on your win! Hugs ~`*
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Date: 3/17/2018 1:56:00 PM
- Congratulations with your lovely winner poems of truth, Hannah :) - Happy weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/17/2018 9:35:00 AM
Everyone can relate to this endearing poem. Well done, Hannah. And congrats.
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Date: 3/15/2018 1:00:00 PM
Nice write. Very compelling and creative. Enjoyed immensely.
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Date: 3/1/2018 11:21:00 PM
Great poem!! Well done..
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Date: 3/1/2018 9:34:00 PM
everyone says "I'm fine" when they'r not sometimes... lovely poem, i can relate to this so much :)
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