Fine, Just Fine

You’re fine
That special line you tell yourself       
Each and everyday
Everything is great you say
When reality tries to take you away
You put on a show
For all those around
You don’t let anyone know
That the only real lie you tell
Is I’m fine
Those thoughts you confine
Grow grow and grow
And you try but there is nothing
you can do about it
Eventually 
They’ll consume you
Bit by bit
While you sit alone
Crying yourself to sleep
Hoping you’ll never wake up
And when you’re gone
Everyone will see
That when you said I’m fine
You really meant “help me”


~ 3/1/2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Krampe Avatar
March 19, 2018 at 5:11 PM
Congrats on your win, Hannah. Lots of truth in your poem.
Neumann Avatar
March 18, 2018 at 3:49 AM
F..., those facades. Thank you penning it. There is a fine line between pretending and bucking oneself up. Congratulations on your win. This is a textbook poem message. Please help others and please ask for help...
Barden Avatar
March 18, 2018 at 2:55 AM
Heartfelt congratulations on your well-deserved win, Hannah - blessings and best wishes to you, friend! :-)
Rodrigues Avatar
March 18, 2018 at 12:17 AM
I remember this one! Makes an impact! Congrats, Hannah!
Singh  Avatar
March 18, 2018 at 12:06 AM
Congrats on winning! Have an amazing day! :)
Roper Avatar
March 17, 2018 at 7:36 PM
Hannah,well done and enjoyed reading.. Congratulations on your win! Hugs ~`*
Andresen Avatar
March 17, 2018 at 1:56 PM
- Congratulations with your lovely winner poems of truth, Hannah :) - Happy weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Gauthier Avatar
March 17, 2018 at 9:35 AM
Everyone can relate to this endearing poem. Well done, Hannah. And congrats.
Sheehan Avatar
March 15, 2018 at 1:00 PM
Nice write. Very compelling and creative. Enjoyed immensely.
B. Avatar
March 1, 2018 at 11:21 PM
Great poem!! Well done..
Raynes Avatar
March 1, 2018 at 9:34 PM
everyone says "I'm fine" when they'r not sometimes... lovely poem, i can relate to this so much :)
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