William Kelii Kekaula Poet Senryu

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Fine Art - Hiku

*Image of A Japanese Comb Set by Pixabay.
*When left at one's front door symbolizes 'parting' or 'goodbye'


fine art 1 - hiku

art writes to you
art is a written form~~
read between the lines


fine art 2 - hiku

art speaks to you
art is a spoken form~~
lost in translation

2022 February 12
*1st Place*
A Strand (1072)
~~Brian Strand: Judged 2022 February 13

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Bill Baker February 12, 2022 at 11:37 PM Depth in this Haiku, Hilo. I like the lovely images you chose to accompany your poem. Have a great day! Bill William Kelii Kekaula February 13, 2022 at 12:36 AM Thanks again, Bill, as your expressions grow appreciably my friend, Aloha~William!

Sotto Poet February 12, 2022 at 5:18 PM Great Hiku's William. A piece of art is a way of permanently committing sentiments and thoughts to a substance. Why bother committing to something if it is not designed to last if it is not deeply rooted in one's heart and mind? William Kelii Kekaula February 12, 2022 at 7:17 PM The pith of it, a rare few will understand the artisan's intent, a rarer few will understand the artisans themselves ... then there is the rarest breed of all. Those who are capable to be the artisan, naught via assimilation but by a collection of values and strengths of that that possesses, my friend. Aloha~William!

Sara Kendrick February 12, 2022 at 3:28 AM I like these which explain some symbols in another culture. The comb set is very beautiful but would be the bearer of sad news. Your visit to my page was uplifting. Sara William Kelii Kekaula February 12, 2022 at 9:56 AM You are certainly deserving, Sara and your added input exposing the featured image and subsequent message is as you've indicated bearing an underlying conveyance, whereto, the giver's gesture shows their incapable to perform the simple act of saying goodbye, having found it too arduous to tax their souls my friend, Aloha~William!