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Finding Your Path

listen with your eyes
save your thoughts and remember
patience descends if you wait

giving all respect 
true joy is found in giving
and you will be respected

Copyright © Tom Larrow | Year Posted 2013

philosophytruthwisdomsedoka

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July 10, 2020 at 7:23 PM

Very good life lesson

September 19, 2013 at 1:21 PM

Good comments here Tom, hope you and all yours are well; Joe..)

September 8, 2013 at 9:55 PM

good advise Congrats on your win. Morgan

September 7, 2013 at 9:10 PM

Congrats Tom, in Debbie's awesome contest....... SKAT

September 7, 2013 at 8:04 PM

congrats on your win :)

September 7, 2013 at 6:05 PM

What did your eyes hear? What does patience look like? smell like taste like, move toward .. showing. Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

September 7, 2013 at 6:21 PM

Very good points, next time better. Thank you. Anata no kenkyona gakusei kara

Richard Lamoureux

September 7, 2013 at 7:17 AM

Well done, congratulations.

September 7, 2013 at 6:23 PM

Thank you for reading

September 7, 2013 at 5:45 AM

Congrats on the win

September 7, 2013 at 7:11 AM

Yasashi-sa no kotoba wa, watashi no sensei arigato - Thank you for reading

Poet Destroyer A

September 7, 2013 at 4:45 AM

Good morning Tom, a wonderful and smooth win. gentle for the readers. ..luv. linda

September 7, 2013 at 5:15 AM

Uchi to soto de utsukushi josei to shijin ni kansha - Thank you for reading

Andrea Dietrich

September 6, 2013 at 11:10 PM

you gotta love those Asian ways. So respectful. Congrats for the HM.

September 7, 2013 at 2:34 AM

doumo arigatou gozaimashita - thank you for reading

September 6, 2013 at 3:05 PM

Congrats on your unique winning work..Sara

September 7, 2013 at 2:34 AM

doumo arigatou gozaimashita - thank you for reading

August 31, 2013 at 8:44 AM

Please give ponce over to fourth line for less syllable if it is for the contest

August 31, 2013 at 1:00 PM

Thank you, I still saw 5 syllables but, a 2nd look made me rethink the wording. 5-7-7 5-7-7 is that correct for sedoka ?

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