Finding the Light


Yesterday a world black in satin sky,
Painted patterns upon of dappled light,
Whilst I enjoyed sonorous breathing waves.

My ocean soul reclaiming crunching waves,
A smile clings to the pure warmth of the sky,
Whilst roots reach to the sprinkle rays of light.

Birdsong, through their faint, meek, percussion light,
Truce existence spills fresh acoustic waves.
My threads of light reflect the twilight sky.

Sky's silence in waves alive in His light.

11/10/2023
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Goldsmith Avatar
November 15, 2023 at 9:43 AM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful write with a great ending. Love It...   Have a blessed day writing away...........
Horne Avatar
November 11, 2023 at 3:45 AM
this is just beautiful
Roper Avatar
November 11, 2023 at 4:52 AM
Thank you, that means a lot coming from you.Many blessings
Empress Avatar
November 10, 2023 at 10:04 AM
Your way with painting imagery is so delicately beautiful. I thought the words you’ve chosen and. How well you’ve crafted this. Goodluck for the contest
Kendrick Avatar
November 10, 2023 at 6:55 AM
I enjoyed reading your contest entry. Way to go. Thanks for sharing it with us and for dropping by my page with encouragement. Sara K
Meadows Avatar
November 10, 2023 at 3:10 AM
A good poem. Well done.
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