Finding Tears

I could see the sweat
on her top lip,
just before she dabbed it away 
with the cuff of her shirt


going through 
machinations of life,
all the while
a carnival ride
of rollercoastered pain 
was shooting away 
beneath the fringe


and the only other tell,
(I ever saw)
was the slight twinge
at every other crack


I watched her laugh,
smile, 
all the while, the lights
were blaring,
at nothing
and everything


it was in the end,
when the craving for life
fleetingly left eyes


in the finality of a breath
her hands relaxed
over the ethereal,
she had found a peace
that radiated 
in ripples of calm


she had opened 
a seam in the fabric
that illuminated
a spec of earth,


that is now, 
impressed with time…


it’s with spirit
I endeavor,
pounding rocks
for that ever elusive
spark …
and waiting for the fabric


to rip again
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Jenkins Avatar
January 25, 2010 at 5:17 AM
wow that is a strong poem. Keep it up
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