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Finding Sense

They say its what were born with a simple nature not so simple The questions arent so easy The fairy tales Not so real Do we find hope to live or live to hope Birthed into a machine A world not forgiving can we say they're wrong was it selfish or was it self righteous can we understand can we see what one another has seen we are blind community teaches submission questions bring fear Where do we go from here the path is black turning back has become no option not for the brave strength is a myth common sense becomes uncommon amongst the lost we fade in the backround the music plays its already over

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Date: 1/24/2012 8:39:00 AM
Enjoyed your poem. Elizabeth
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Date: 1/24/2012 5:25:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Cake. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol
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