Finding Reality

Falling into a bed of roses
I find the pain within her heart
Then a pink cactus pricks my soul
Leading me to believe she’s not right for me
I don’t know what’s truly real
Maybe she could just tell me…

Russell Sivey
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Johnson Avatar
May 28, 2012 at 11:56 PM
Lationshippers relationships the ebb n flow, are they the one, its hard to know, some never let, true feelings show, the end result regret, another game n set, busted heart throb throes, like a punch in the bloody nose, better luck next time ol Mose, catchem shiela if m let.... thanks Russell Siveys :Finding reality" Don
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May 27, 2012 at 10:01 PM
hahahahaha....fun fun tho'ts of the female psyche! Gosh dernnitt! We are complicated creatures! Enjoyed this one too! :) Gwendolen
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May 27, 2012 at 9:24 PM
lovely imagery!
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