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Finding Reality

Falling into a bed of roses I find the pain within her heart Then a pink cactus pricks my soul Leading me to believe she’s not right for me I don’t know what’s truly real Maybe she could just tell me… Russell Sivey

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Don Johnson

Date: 5/28/2012 11:56:00 PM

Lationshippers relationships the ebb n flow, are they the one, its hard to know, some never let, true feelings show, the end result regret, another game n set, busted heart throb throes, like a punch in the bloody nose, better luck next time ol Mose, catchem shiela if m let.... thanks Russell Siveys :Finding reality" Don

Gwendolen Song

Date: 5/27/2012 10:01:00 PM

hahahahaha....fun fun tho'ts of the female psyche! Gosh dernnitt! We are complicated creatures! Enjoyed this one too! :) Gwendolen

Lisa Cooper

Date: 5/27/2012 9:24:00 PM

lovely imagery!