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wind spinning tripped and slipping to your weight
your eyes opened when i thought i wouldnt wait
But what if i wait? she could move herself away leave holes in my universe
Bring clouds around the stars
Or i could stare into her gaze and really just hope for the best
untangle the lights from the maze and confusion
The delusions i create
Im going too fast so im scared to wobble and to fall
And to ignore all the costs of letting the wind take it all
And so these walls shelter me from the cold
Bring warmth for this winter
Im in the pines of where ever is there
Im in the final splinter of light in the fire needing repair
So if you care to stare into my 
gaze and slowly burn your eyes
We can be blind together
To let our minds be our minds

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 8/4/2015 12:11:00 AM
Hi PJ, that is deep, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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