Finding My Heart

Sometimes it makes me wonder,
Why is there no one for me to surrender.
Why being so intense has created trouble,
Why there is no one to make complicated thing subtle.

I wonder from being  
that  will my future be my present as now as I am swing.
No hearts to share,
It is something I would give a dare
Standing for someone  loving the only one
Is something I found in fairytails,
But in reality no one cares.

Oh heartless people!
Oh superficial creatures
Listen to the call of our heart,
Because there is someone who needs you from start.

Sometimes I wonder,
Why there is no one for me to surrender?
Has life made us wild?
Is there is only selfishness for what we do strive?
If there are feathers then why do we need knives

If there is love then how do I find none,
I see it is taken for granted by some.
I am in sorrow ,
Waiting for the love of tommorow,
Keeping my heart alive for the only one.
For the little crystal of love which I only want.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 6/14/2015 2:44:00 PM
Congrats on your win:) Alexis
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Date: 6/15/2015 3:39:00 AM
Thanx a lot alexis! -Aanika
Date: 6/1/2015 6:51:00 PM
Congrats on your winning work..Way to go..Sara
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Date: 6/4/2015 12:11:00 AM
Thankyou Sara! Aanika
Date: 5/27/2015 5:21:00 PM
Aanika, Congratulations on your wonderful win. Always ~LINDA~
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Date: 5/27/2015 11:44:00 PM
Thanx a lot linda!
Date: 5/27/2015 10:13:00 AM
Aanika, Congratulations, thanks for the contest support. Hugs SKAT
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Date: 5/27/2015 11:27:00 AM
Thanx a lot SKAT A! Its my pleasure to be a part of d contest!!
Date: 5/4/2015 5:22:00 AM
Yes a warm welcome indeed. Now..You entered this Gem in My Best Pick Up Line Contest. It is fantastic but it is not a pickup line. Perhaps you would care to withdraw it from the contest and enter a pickup line which is when someone you don't know comes up to you flirting and says something like,"Hey Babe you miss me?" and you reply, "Not Yet"....
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Date: 3/22/2015 9:56:00 AM
- A wonderful write, Aanika :) - A warm greeting from Norway - Welcome to P-Soup - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/1/2015 3:27:00 PM
Nice. This one I liked for sure. Real deep, Aanika Aery
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Aanika Aery
Date: 3/9/2015 11:09:00 AM
Thanks..
Date: 2/27/2015 4:28:00 PM
I thought the repeating lines, 'Sometimes I wonder/Why there is no one for me to surrender?' was a tender touch. Good job, Aanika!
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Date: 3/9/2015 11:05:00 AM
Thnx!
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Date: 3/9/2015 11:04:00 AM
Date: 2/22/2015 12:09:00 AM
Thankyou all for your beautiful comments. I would sure like to contact you . Please help me to get my poems published.
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Date: 2/21/2015 10:11:00 PM
Aanika, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 2/22/2015 12:14:00 AM
I would love to be in contact with you. Please help me to enter contests and get my poems published.
Date: 2/21/2015 8:45:00 PM
Aanika, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun in this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST in hopes it inspires you in some way. I will enjoy following you and your poetry:) This is a great way to get through the year. Lucky Us, To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends! @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 2/22/2015 12:13:00 AM
Thankyou for showing your concern. I would love to enter in your completion so please send me the name if the contest. Please help me to get my poem published.
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