Finding Mother Earth

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Written for the contest: 4 line monorhyme with the theme Mother, Meander or Moment. I chose mother, but meandering moments are too good to be not included.

Finding Mother Earth The moment’s monumental blip in time and place attempts to find meandering fluctuating oscillating resting points in mother’s mind She lights a candle incense soothing oils seeks terra firma of a kind loving compassionate Gaia to leave her spinning troubles all behind 15th April 2017

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Darren White

Date: 4/17/2017 4:27:00 AM

You are right, in your monorhyme all words have their proper place, and not only the three you mention. Wishing you well in the contest :)