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Written for the contest: 4 line monorhyme with the theme Mother, Meander or Moment. I chose mother, but meandering moments are too good to be not included.

Finding Mother Earth 

The moment’s monumental blip in time and place attempts to find
meandering fluctuating oscillating resting points in mother’s mind 
She lights a candle incense soothing oils seeks terra firma of a kind
loving compassionate Gaia to leave her spinning troubles all behind

15th April 2017

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 4/17/2017 4:27:00 AM
You are right, in your monorhyme all words have their proper place, and not only the three you mention. Wishing you well in the contest :)
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