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"My path had no instructions it had a Mom." by _ this girl
Mom, I miss you so much, I wish for words with you today; my sorrow falls, falls, falls, falls- all day long, and a distant shadow murmurs. Your spirit softly glows, and I find calm tranquility; a kind touch upon my hair- and my mind, words flowing as thoughts that I grasp. Angst is floating away, this bond brings us such harmony; and I can contact Mom- again, again, flying with soft wings of a bird. I can find Nirvana, and walk within a placid hush; for a gold portal is ajar- and waits, and I am on a truthful path. _____________________ January 05, 2023 Poetry/Verse/Lipogram/Finding Mom Copyright Protected, ID 01-1514-557-05 All Rights Reserved, 2023, Constance La France Written for the Premiere contest, Lipogram (no e's) sponsor, Emile Pinet, Judged 01/31/2023 Second Place

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Date: 2/4/2023 1:11:00 AM
Congratulations on your podium finish, Constance. I like the content of your poem and its smooth flow, considering that not using the letter 'E' could have been a hinderance. ~ Best regards // paul
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Date: 2/4/2023 6:38:00 AM
Paul, thank you so much for the congratulations, compliment and lovely comment, not using the letter E was a nightmare, Constance
Date: 1/31/2023 10:46:00 PM
Heartfelt weepy write, Constance, congratulations:)
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Date: 2/1/2023 10:37:00 AM
Dear Jo, thank you so much for the comment and congratulations, blessings ~Constance
Date: 1/31/2023 10:58:00 AM
Congratulations Constance! Your sad and emotional poem "Finding Mom" achieved second place, well done my friend, Emile.
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Date: 2/1/2023 10:38:00 AM
Dear Emile, thank you so much for the contest, and my wonderful placement, and for the congratulations and compliment, blessings ~Constance
Date: 1/10/2023 3:27:00 PM
Peace and blessings to you Constance.'
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Date: 1/10/2023 4:03:00 PM
Joe, thank you so much for the visit and comment, Constance
Date: 1/6/2023 5:10:00 PM
Just beautiful, Constance. Soupmail for ya.
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Date: 1/6/2023 10:50:00 PM
Andrea, thank you so much for the visit, comment and compliment (going to check the soupmail now) Constance
Date: 1/5/2023 1:24:00 PM
Your "Finding Mom" is a lovely write/picture. Have a blessed day writing away.................
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Constance La France
Date: 1/5/2023 6:08:00 PM
Paula, thank you so much for the visit and compliment, Constance

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