Constance La France Poet Verse

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Finding Mom

"My path had no instructions it had a Mom."

                                                   by _ this girl

                    Mom, I miss you so much,
      I wish for words with you today;
  my sorrow falls, falls, falls, falls-  all day long,
          and a distant shadow murmurs.

                    Your spirit softly glows,
        and I find calm tranquility;
   a kind touch upon my hair-   and my mind,
        words flowing as thoughts that I grasp.

                   Angst is floating away,
        this bond brings us such harmony;
    and I can contact Mom-    again, again,
        flying with soft wings of a bird.

                    I can find Nirvana,
        and walk within a placid hush;
    for a gold portal is ajar-    and waits,
        and I am on a truthful path. 

_____________________
January 05, 2023


Poetry/Verse/Lipogram/Finding Mom
Copyright Protected, ID 01-1514-557-05
All Rights Reserved, 2023, Constance La France

Written for the Premiere contest, Lipogram (no e's)
sponsor, Emile Pinet, Judged 01/31/2023

Second Place

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Paul Callus February 4, 2023 at 1:11 AM Congratulations on your podium finish, Constance. I like the content of your poem and its smooth flow, considering that not using the letter 'E' could have been a hinderance. ~ Best regards // paul Constance La France February 4, 2023 at 6:38 AM Paul, thank you so much for the congratulations, compliment and lovely comment, not using the letter E was a nightmare, Constance

Joanna Daniel January 31, 2023 at 10:46 PM Heartfelt weepy write, Constance, congratulations:) Constance La France February 1, 2023 at 10:37 AM Dear Jo, thank you so much for the comment and congratulations, blessings ~Constance

Emile Pinet January 31, 2023 at 10:58 AM Congratulations Constance! Your sad and emotional poem "Finding Mom" achieved second place, well done my friend, Emile. Constance La France February 1, 2023 at 10:38 AM Dear Emile, thank you so much for the contest, and my wonderful placement, and for the congratulations and compliment, blessings ~Constance

Joe Maverick January 10, 2023 at 3:27 PM Peace and blessings to you Constance.' Constance La France January 10, 2023 at 4:03 PM Joe, thank you so much for the visit and comment, Constance

Andrea Dietrich January 6, 2023 at 5:10 PM Just beautiful, Constance. Soupmail for ya. Constance La France January 6, 2023 at 10:50 PM Andrea, thank you so much for the visit, comment and compliment (going to check the soupmail now) Constance

Paula Goldsmith January 5, 2023 at 1:24 PM Your "Finding Mom" is a lovely write/picture. Have a blessed day writing away................. Constance La France January 5, 2023 at 6:08 PM Paula, thank you so much for the visit and compliment, Constance