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Finding ''Me''

 
Babbling brooks whisper in trembling trees, winds wander through the tangled weeping willows. Blushing buds where hummer's hover, vivacious vines creeping twining teasers. Walk warrior trails tempting, heavenly harmony blissful balm, I find "me" in nature's artistry. _______________________ November 5, 2021 Poetry/Verse/Alliterisen/Finding ''Me'' Copyright Protected, ID 11-1403-757-05 All Rights Reserved, 2021, Constance La France Written for the Standard contest, Alliterisen - 7 Lines sponsor, Joseph May, Judged 11/29/2021 Second Place
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Dietrich Avatar
December 4, 2021 at 11:40 AM
yes, here was the first one. So pretty it is. And Congrats.
La France Avatar
December 4, 2021 at 5:57 PM
Andrea, thanks for the visit and compliment and congrats ~ love and serenity _Constance
May Avatar
November 29, 2021 at 5:54 PM
Very nicely done Constance, Congrats on your win
La France Avatar
November 30, 2021 at 9:26 AM
Joseph, thanks for the inspiration and the contest and for my placement, and the compliment and congrats ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
Messina Avatar
November 29, 2021 at 5:11 PM
So lovely, Constance. Congratulations on your winning poem!
La France Avatar
November 30, 2021 at 9:27 AM
Charlie, thank you for the compliment and congratulations ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
Logan Avatar
November 29, 2021 at 10:56 AM
Big congrats on your winning write, Constance. It's a lovely as your chosen photo.
La France Avatar
November 29, 2021 at 12:53 PM
Jenna, thank you for the congrats and compliment, this is one of my fav images ~ love and serenity _Constance
Allison Avatar
November 23, 2021 at 6:32 AM
Absolutely stunning Constance, theimagery and flow is so beautiful, i am still batttling with my thoughts lol, hugs jan xx
La France Avatar
November 23, 2021 at 9:24 AM
Jan, thanks for the compliment, hope you are feeling better, hugs ~ love and serenity _Constance
Ray Choudhury Avatar
November 6, 2021 at 6:01 AM
Stunning poem, Constance. Alliteration couldn't be better than this! And I love your theme - "Finding Me" - absolutely beautiful! Love and hugs ~ Mala
La France Avatar
November 6, 2021 at 7:11 AM
Mala, thank you for the compliment and comment, hugs ~ love and serenity _Constance
Dietrich Avatar
November 5, 2021 at 4:15 PM
Wonderful writing, Dear Heart. Wish we talked more. I miss our soupmails!
La France Avatar
November 6, 2021 at 7:12 AM
Andrea, thanks for the compliment, I miss you too will send you a soupie today ~love and serenity_ your Dear Heart, Constance
De Beaulieu Avatar
November 5, 2021 at 12:00 PM
Hello Constance, ienjoyed reading this poem. Good luck in the contest. Love & Harmony Darlene
De Beaulieu Avatar
November 7, 2021 at 11:07 AM
Hello Constance, you are welcome Peace & Tranquility. Darlene
La France Avatar
November 5, 2021 at 2:00 PM
Darlene thanks for the compliment and encouragement ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
Hankins Avatar
November 5, 2021 at 11:40 AM
Absolutely splendid writing, Constance, and I know how hard this format is to deal with. Best wishes in the contest.
La France Avatar
November 5, 2021 at 2:01 PM
Milt, thank you for the compliment on my poem yes the form was very difficult to write ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
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