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Finding Heart In Tears

A day that should bring happy things, but memories of you was all it did bring A dozen years past, since you went away, and every step taken from then till today I walked in your footprints light and deft, always minding, not to smudge your step Passing mistakes piled in heaps, and your there saying “Honey learn as you weep” Words of wisdom, now I know, you only wanted me to grow The tears that I cry contain a nucleus of you, and surrounding the rest pure indigo blue A day wont go past that I wont miss you, but sweet are the thoughts when I dream in the dew Inveigled in these thoughts my beacon of one, my beginning of end that time begun

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 9/6/2009 6:46:00 PM
i love your simplicity. and it's not hard to see where your going with the piece your feelings are genuine thats what makes the ideals seem as if they come from above. good work John H loving III
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Date: 9/6/2009 5:26:00 AM
The reflection in this poem is excellent. Good memories are the best and they are hard to erase. I like the flow of the words and the message. Great job! ~Joseph
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Date: 9/6/2009 4:58:00 AM
Another delightful poem Jayne. the flow was terrific. Your pen is dancing beautifully>>James,xx
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