Finding Haiku

upon each moment
roosts a peacock- fully fanned
veiled from trite peruse
as keen eyes pause and ponder
the faint outline of feathers
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Carmack Avatar
December 5, 2020 at 6:35 AM
clever
Dietrich Avatar
September 13, 2020 at 2:05 PM
Profound, David! (just like some of the best haiku should be)
Nicole Avatar
September 6, 2020 at 9:35 PM
"each moment roosts a peacock- fully fanned" I never thought of it in that way. So beautiful, and so are peacocks. :) Brandy
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