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Finding a Treasure In the Sand

As I walk the sandy beach, a sea shell my hand will reach. Wash it off in the blue water, to give to my daughter. A chain I found under a rock, I will wear it with my smock. I found treasures for my daughter and for me, now let's go eat some crackers and brie. Date Written:3/26/2020 Honorable Mention BRIAN'S CHOICE 10, any form, any theme Contest Judged:5/30/2020 Sponsored by: Brian Strand

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Eric Cohen

Date: 3/28/2020 9:09:00 PM

Delightful, Paula. Wish I could be walking on the beach about now. Was thinking about a trip to Sanibel Island (famous for sea shells), but not to be this year what with travel woes and all. Best to you.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/29/2020 11:36:00 AM

Thank You, for reading and writing. Glad you like it. Never been to Sanibel Island. Sure sounds good right about now. I would to walk on a beach. Have a good day..............

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 3/28/2020 12:32:00 PM

Sounds like fun. Thanks for your visit. ;0)

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/28/2020 12:42:00 PM

Thanks for you note. The beach can be a ton of fun. Have fun writing today..........

Anil Deo

Date: 3/28/2020 12:31:00 PM

rewarding time at the Beach, hallelujah

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/28/2020 12:41:00 PM

Thanks for your note. I love the beach and miss it very much. Enjoy writing....................

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/27/2020 8:27:00 PM

what a precious sweet treasure I found in this little poem!!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/28/2020 10:25:00 AM

Thank You, for your note. Glad you like it. I love the beach. You never know what you will find. Have a wonderful day...........

Sandra Adams

Date: 3/26/2020 5:02:00 PM

love this Paula... the shore is my favorite place....so many shells I have found with small holes that would look adorable as a necklace... I have shells in my car, in my house, even a couple sand dollars... lovely write! hugs and blessings

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/26/2020 5:27:00 PM

Thank You for writing. Yes, the shore is also my favorite place. I grew up going to the beach. I do not live near the water and I really miss it. Glad you like it. Hugs and blessings to you. Be safe...........