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Write Ten Beautiful Lines Poetry Contest

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"The saddest thing about love is that not only the love cannot last forever, but even the heartbreak is soon forgotten." – William Faulkner You cannot be my love, for you have gone To far-off lands, there just on the other side Of the horizon, bleak and dark. Now our love, Like the sinking sun, turning gold to red, Only to disperse into a cataclysmic dark. There's a deep loneliness that spreads like venom Into my very soul; but there is courage, too. For will not the dying sun dawn up again next morn? I harbour hope for a new love; the tide will turn again A new life begins. The waning sun turns to fiery gold. Placed 1

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Date: 4/13/2025 8:12:00 PM
stunning quote, enigmatic write. 'The waning sun turns to fiery gold' beautiful imagery. Congratulations on your win dear poet.Cheers!!!
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Date: 4/13/2025 10:24:00 AM
- Back with a congrats on your winning poem, Victor :) - Have a lovely Easter :) - hugs
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Date: 4/13/2025 8:40:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your romantic yet sad write, quote and picture. Great Ending... Life goes on. Have a blessed day with your win................
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Date: 4/11/2025 4:41:00 PM
"I harbour hope for a new love; the tide will turn again A new life begins. The waning sun turns to fiery gold." Very nice, Victor; well done -- beautiful imagery and sentiment. Have a great weekend!
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Date: 4/10/2025 3:50:00 PM
You delivered a great deal emotion in this write, a real 'feeler', Victor. I'm sure it will shine in the contest. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
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Date: 4/10/2025 2:36:00 AM
sun wakes up every morning, mays be love can do the same, beautifully penned , thanks poet
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Date: 4/9/2025 11:41:00 PM
Ten beautiful lines indeed, Victor.
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Date: 4/9/2025 4:56:00 PM
Hope is what keeps us afloat long after our love has passed, Victor
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Date: 4/9/2025 4:27:00 PM
Lovely lines Victor, loneliness is a cloak one has to wear, when their love is no longer there. All the best… Beryl
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Date: 4/9/2025 2:55:00 AM
Dearest Victor,beautifully written with a lovely blend of melancholy and hope—like watching a sunset and knowing the sunrise isn’t far behind. A gentle, heartfelt poem...Hugs
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Date: 4/8/2025 8:59:00 PM
A hopeful heart is reborn with the sunrise. An upbeat, charming tale. :)
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Date: 4/8/2025 8:58:00 PM
Excellent Like the poem.
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Date: 4/8/2025 11:52:00 AM
Hello Victor, I do hope you will find your new love. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/
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Date: 4/8/2025 11:48:00 AM
Loved the ending. Heartbreak gives way to me beginnings. Good luxuries in the contest.
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Date: 4/8/2025 10:30:00 AM
- Distance can be a big challenge in a relationship... a lovely poem, Victor :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
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Date: 4/8/2025 10:16:00 AM
As the saying goes, seek and you shall find, never give up. Good luck in the contest Victor. Tom
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