Finding a Box of Life

One late night, I fell asleep in my chair
I dreamed of finding a box with a treasure so rare.
In this dream was a soldier and a good one at that.
I saw his old suit and his old tattered hat.

He had tried to stay youthful, but old he must be.
He walked with a limp because of his bad knee.
In the dream I visited with him one day.
And he told me a story that put me in dismay.

He said, "Here's a box that I'm giving to you.
It has a great treasure, if only you knew.
It contains this old coin, as you can see it's so old.
But to me it's worth more than all the silver and gold.

For you can see in the middle is a great big dent.
And there was so much force, that's why it's so bent.
I was out on the battlefield one dark night you see.
When a bullet was fired and it came straight at me.

This coin I had placed round my neck, next to my heart,
Was a prayer from my mother, she had sent from the start.
The bullet hit the coin and knocked me to the ground.
So I thank the Lord for this treasure that I found.

This coin in the box saved my life on that day.
Now you take it, treasure it and go on your way."

Thank you grandmother for listening to the Lord one day.
And sending dad this precious coin, which in this box I'll lay!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Mehta Avatar
March 30, 2010 at 7:22 PM
Congrats on the win. Fine rhyming
Villarosa Avatar
March 28, 2010 at 10:51 PM
Very sentimental of this one and worthy to be treasured and kept by your side always, congratulations on this well-deserved win, Marty. (^_^) Noel.
Richards Avatar
March 28, 2010 at 10:31 AM
What a heartwarming poem, and a well deserved win, Marty!! A treasured story, and makes tears fall ....Congratulations on your win! Love, Carrie
White Avatar
March 27, 2010 at 10:22 PM
Congrats Marty- this is a winner
Sweetheart Avatar
March 27, 2010 at 8:09 PM
Big congrats on your winning poem in the I Dreamed contest.. knew it the first time I read it.. enjoy your special victory walk to the winners circle .. .. luv it.. "Sweetheart"
Johnson Avatar
March 27, 2010 at 6:19 PM
Great story and congratulations on your win. Joyce
A  Avatar
March 22, 2010 at 10:15 AM
A true work of talent..Had a pleasure reading your poetry today...
White Avatar
March 16, 2010 at 8:13 PM
Great story, heartfelt- I sent you some mail
Freeman Avatar
March 15, 2010 at 9:06 AM
Magnificent Story so spiritual in deed. Thanks for sharing this gem. Agape, Moses
Thekidster Avatar
March 14, 2010 at 3:56 AM
Great Write Marty. It reminds me of an incident my Dad had during the war. (WW2). You may have very well inspired me to write about it. Best Wishes Always, Bill
Dufresne Avatar
March 13, 2010 at 7:47 PM
Well done my poetic friend! You put this story together like an artist! wonderful! Robert
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March 13, 2010 at 8:12 AM
Got goosebumps when the old man revealed how the coin had saved his life, Marty. You wove quite a compelling tale in this great poem! Love, Carolyn
Sweetheart Avatar
March 12, 2010 at 9:13 PM
This poem really touched me Marty ..had to come back and read again... thankxxx for enjoying my "passion pit" poetry tonight... just posted a new blog if u can check it out ...please...luv.. and thankxxx "Sweetie"
Sweetheart Avatar
March 11, 2010 at 7:47 PM
Excellent .. Superb write Marty and lots of good luck for the contest.. amazing this story and u have captured it brilliantly.. an enjoyable read tonight..luv.. "Sweetheart"
Richards Avatar
March 11, 2010 at 5:57 PM
What a wonderful, and dreamy poem of your wonderful treasured coin, Marty. Very enjoyable! Good luck if this is entered into the contest! ~ Love, Carrie
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March 11, 2010 at 9:40 AM
enjoyed reading today, I am doing ok thanks for asking.
Arteaga Avatar
March 11, 2010 at 7:48 AM
o great poem, and such good rhyme, what a wonderful story you told.
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