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Finding a Box of Life

One late night, I fell asleep in my chair I dreamed of finding a box with a treasure so rare. In this dream was a soldier and a good one at that. I saw his old suit and his old tattered hat. He had tried to stay youthful, but old he must be. He walked with a limp because of his bad knee. In the dream I visited with him one day. And he told me a story that put me in dismay. He said, "Here's a box that I'm giving to you. It has a great treasure, if only you knew. It contains this old coin, as you can see it's so old. But to me it's worth more than all the silver and gold. For you can see in the middle is a great big dent. And there was so much force, that's why it's so bent. I was out on the battlefield one dark night you see. When a bullet was fired and it came straight at me. This coin I had placed round my neck, next to my heart, Was a prayer from my mother, she had sent from the start. The bullet hit the coin and knocked me to the ground. So I thank the Lord for this treasure that I found. This coin in the box saved my life on that day. Now you take it, treasure it and go on your way." Thank you grandmother for listening to the Lord one day. And sending dad this precious coin, which in this box I'll lay!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/30/2010 7:22:00 PM
Congrats on the win. Fine rhyming
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Date: 3/28/2010 10:51:00 PM
Very sentimental of this one and worthy to be treasured and kept by your side always, congratulations on this well-deserved win, Marty. (^_^) Noel.
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Date: 3/28/2010 10:31:00 AM
What a heartwarming poem, and a well deserved win, Marty!! A treasured story, and makes tears fall ....Congratulations on your win! Love, Carrie
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Date: 3/27/2010 10:22:00 PM
Congrats Marty- this is a winner
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Date: 3/27/2010 8:09:00 PM
Big congrats on your winning poem in the I Dreamed contest.. knew it the first time I read it.. enjoy your special victory walk to the winners circle .. .. luv it.. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 3/27/2010 6:19:00 PM
Great story and congratulations on your win. Joyce
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Date: 3/22/2010 10:15:00 AM
A true work of talent..Had a pleasure reading your poetry today...
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Date: 3/16/2010 8:13:00 PM
Great story, heartfelt- I sent you some mail
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Date: 3/15/2010 9:06:00 AM
Magnificent Story so spiritual in deed. Thanks for sharing this gem. Agape, Moses
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Date: 3/14/2010 3:56:00 AM
Great Write Marty. It reminds me of an incident my Dad had during the war. (WW2). You may have very well inspired me to write about it. Best Wishes Always, Bill
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Date: 3/13/2010 7:47:00 PM
Well done my poetic friend! You put this story together like an artist! wonderful! Robert
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Date: 3/13/2010 8:12:00 AM
Got goosebumps when the old man revealed how the coin had saved his life, Marty. You wove quite a compelling tale in this great poem! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/12/2010 9:13:00 PM
This poem really touched me Marty ..had to come back and read again... thankxxx for enjoying my "passion pit" poetry tonight... just posted a new blog if u can check it out ...please...luv.. and thankxxx "Sweetie"
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Date: 3/11/2010 7:47:00 PM
Excellent .. Superb write Marty and lots of good luck for the contest.. amazing this story and u have captured it brilliantly.. an enjoyable read tonight..luv.. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 3/11/2010 5:57:00 PM
What a wonderful, and dreamy poem of your wonderful treasured coin, Marty. Very enjoyable! Good luck if this is entered into the contest! ~ Love, Carrie
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Date: 3/11/2010 9:40:00 AM
enjoyed reading today, I am doing ok thanks for asking.
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Date: 3/11/2010 7:48:00 AM
o great poem, and such good rhyme, what a wonderful story you told.
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