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Find Your Sun

I see you there hiding in the corner Why does a beauty as you hide Stay in the light you're not a mourner Stand up, be seen show your pride Your words sent a plea out to my soul I'm here to take your hand into light Only you can make yourself whole Let me then stand beside you to fight Life isn't one should go through alone When you think the darkness has won I will help you take back what you own So once again you find your bright sun

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 6/23/2019 2:51:00 PM
I am retiring to bed now, Poetess...I am happy to see you are back to your normal formidable self. I like it when you write in this upbeat and positive fashion...after all this is the real Brenda Chiri -- Warrior Princess!! Lots of affection as always. :) john
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 6/24/2019 10:03:00 PM
Ah thank you my dear friend! I am happy to be back to writing as such too! Your right iris the true princess warrior write! All my affection
Date: 6/22/2019 6:36:00 PM
great stuffing
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 6/22/2019 8:51:00 PM
Lmao! Why thank you muppet!;) lol! You are so freaking silly Nick!;) thank you!
Date: 6/22/2019 8:30:00 AM
Hi Brenda: A beautiful poem extolling the sun. I also wrote one about the sun called Shadows.
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 6/22/2019 9:13:00 AM
Ralph thank you I will have to go read it!;)
Date: 6/21/2019 3:44:00 AM
Real partnership is that you offer dear poet... i wish i could have one like that... Good poem, really uplifting... salute alkas
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 6/22/2019 9:13:00 AM
Thank I and your so right!;)
Date: 6/20/2019 3:34:00 PM
Nice one Brenda, very uplifting and good imagery too with lovely rhyme. Have a blessed day, Gordon
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 6/20/2019 7:24:00 PM
Godon thank you! I so appreciate your visits and comments!;)
Date: 6/20/2019 8:46:00 AM
Very uplifting and compassionate, Bren, nicely written. All my best. John
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 6/20/2019 8:48:00 AM
Ah John thank you so very much!;)
Date: 6/20/2019 8:05:00 AM
Very upbeat and meaningful poem, Brenda..with your uplifting words you give hope.
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 6/20/2019 8:47:00 AM
Thank our Vijay! Your words mean a lot to me! I really appreciate your read!;)
Date: 6/19/2019 11:46:00 PM
Love the last stanza.
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 6/20/2019 8:46:00 AM
Thank you so much David! You read is appreciated!;)
Date: 6/18/2019 9:36:00 PM
Love the zestful spirit of this one, Brenda. Nicely done. :) gw
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 6/19/2019 7:41:00 PM
Thank you Gershwin! Your read is very much appreciated!
Date: 6/18/2019 9:23:00 PM
Holding hands of hope!
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 6/19/2019 7:40:00 PM
Thank you Kim! I appreciate your read!

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