Brenda Chiri Poet Rhyme

Find Your Sun

I see you there hiding in the corner
Why does a beauty as you hide
Stay in the light you're not a mourner
Stand up, be seen show your pride

Your words sent a plea out to my soul
I'm here to take your hand into light
Only you can make yourself whole
Let me then stand beside you to fight

Life isn't one should go through alone
When you think the darkness has won
I will help you take back what you own
So once again you find your bright sun

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John Fleming June 23, 2019 at 2:51 PM I am retiring to bed now, Poetess...I am happy to see you are back to your normal formidable self. I like it when you write in this upbeat and positive fashion...after all this is the real Brenda Chiri -- Warrior Princess!! Lots of affection as always. :) john Brenda Chiri June 24, 2019 at 10:03 PM Ah thank you my dear friend! I am happy to be back to writing as such too! Your right iris the true princess warrior write! All my affection

Nick Trim June 22, 2019 at 6:36 PM great stuffing Brenda Chiri June 22, 2019 at 8:51 PM Lmao! Why thank you muppet!;) lol! You are so freaking silly Nick!;) thank you!

Ralph Sergi June 22, 2019 at 8:30 AM Hi Brenda: A beautiful poem extolling the sun. I also wrote one about the sun called Shadows. Brenda Chiri June 22, 2019 at 9:13 AM Ralph thank you I will have to go read it!;)

Alkas Poetry June 21, 2019 at 3:44 AM Real partnership is that you offer dear poet... i wish i could have one like that... Good poem, really uplifting... salute alkas Brenda Chiri June 22, 2019 at 9:13 AM Thank I and your so right!;)

Gordon Mcconnell June 20, 2019 at 3:34 PM Nice one Brenda, very uplifting and good imagery too with lovely rhyme. Have a blessed day, Gordon Brenda Chiri June 20, 2019 at 7:24 PM Godon thank you! I so appreciate your visits and comments!;)

John Gondolf June 20, 2019 at 8:46 AM Very uplifting and compassionate, Bren, nicely written. All my best. John Brenda Chiri June 20, 2019 at 8:48 AM Ah John thank you so very much!;)

Vijay Pandit June 20, 2019 at 8:05 AM Very upbeat and meaningful poem, Brenda..with your uplifting words you give hope. Brenda Chiri June 20, 2019 at 8:47 AM Thank our Vijay! Your words mean a lot to me! I really appreciate your read!;)

David Byrne June 19, 2019 at 11:46 PM Love the last stanza. Brenda Chiri June 20, 2019 at 8:46 AM Thank you so much David! You read is appreciated!;)

Gershon Wolf June 18, 2019 at 9:36 PM Love the zestful spirit of this one, Brenda. Nicely done. :) gw Brenda Chiri June 19, 2019 at 7:41 PM Thank you Gershwin! Your read is very much appreciated!

Kim Rodrigues June 18, 2019 at 9:23 PM Holding hands of hope! Brenda Chiri June 19, 2019 at 7:40 PM Thank you Kim! I appreciate your read!