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Find Me In Six - Tranquility

Find Me where the summer breeze is sighing. There time floats me in its endless sea. Engulfed am I - by sweet tranquility. On a lofty esplanade, gulls flying are trailing clouds through azure, wheeling free. Sun flashes gold its grin! There you'll find me. Written Jan. 17, 2017 for the Find Me at Six Contest of nette onclaud
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Smith Avatar
January 23, 2017 at 8:08 AM
Back with a big congrats my friend!!
Warrior Avatar
January 22, 2017 at 8:49 AM
Congrats!!! my friend...God bless...^WW^
Singh Avatar
January 22, 2017 at 2:03 AM
Congrats!
Carmack Avatar
January 21, 2017 at 11:34 PM
Hey, we shared a spot. Congrats Andrea.
Roper Avatar
January 21, 2017 at 9:18 PM
Congratulations on your win girl :) Hugs
Callus Avatar
January 21, 2017 at 3:30 PM
Back with merited congratulations, Andrea. That grin from the sun could not go unnoticed:) Congratulations!! Regards // paul
May Avatar
January 21, 2017 at 2:20 PM
Congrats on a fine win Andrea!
Onclaud Avatar
January 21, 2017 at 2:10 PM
such a splendid turn in the end line , andie... kudos to your fine win and thanks for participating!..huggs
Smith Avatar
January 19, 2017 at 9:51 AM
Tranquil indeed my friend! Good luck in the contest!
Callus Avatar
January 19, 2017 at 6:57 AM
Very lovely, Andrea! I love the sun, too, but I have learnt from experience to beware of its side effects! Regards // paul
Walker Avatar
January 19, 2017 at 6:02 AM
You are a Summer loving gal.
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 19, 2017 at 4:01 AM
Excellent entry which is probably exactly what she is looking for Andrea! : ) 7
Anish Avatar
January 18, 2017 at 10:36 PM
Airy work here! Good luck in the contest! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
Lawless Avatar
January 18, 2017 at 7:34 PM
Nicely done Andrea...as gentle as the picture it portrays
May Avatar
January 18, 2017 at 7:25 PM
Beautiful write Andrea...love the second line...GL in the contest...
Parker Avatar
January 18, 2017 at 7:21 PM
A peaceful write dear poet..good luck
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