Finally It Rains

Cool breeze kisses my cheeks
Clouds gather, spray drizzles
Chill weather says something
Hey, It's going to rain

Standing on the terrace,
I anticipate the rain.
Clouds sprinkle droplets
The floor is full of rain drops

A big drop hits my head
But I don't get hurt
I count the raindrops
1,2,3...Drops keep on increasing

I can hear several sounds
when the raindrops hit trees,
floors and the roof of my home
Windows now, the refuge for wet birds

Plants and trees in my garden,
bath in the pure rain drops,
laugh and sway gleefully,
The birds and I enjoy the serene scene
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Dietrich Avatar
August 1, 2017 at 5:24 PM
what a lovely picture of the start of rain! Great job, Supraja.
Allison Avatar
July 30, 2017 at 5:37 PM
You make the rain sound so delightful Supraja - I love the fresh smell after a shower and then coolness of the air:-) A delightful poem, thanks for sharing:-) hugs Janxx
Kannan Avatar
July 31, 2017 at 2:21 AM
Same here Jan... It's a beautiful refreshing smell... Thanks for stopping by... Glad you enjoyed it...
Hsi Avatar
July 30, 2017 at 10:07 AM
"Cool breeze kisses my cheeks" --- beautiful words. A fine poem!
Kannan Avatar
July 31, 2017 at 2:14 AM
Thank you so much for stopping by Thomas... I am glad you enjoyed it...
Trifiatis Avatar
July 30, 2017 at 8:29 AM
Nothing is more delightful that the coming of rain after a long anticipation! When it happens it is pure magic! A marvelous scenery my friend, Supraja!
Kannan Avatar
July 31, 2017 at 2:13 AM
Exactly... So glad you enjoyed it... Thank you so much...
Sands Avatar
July 30, 2017 at 7:52 AM
Very nice, I felt like I was right there, reading this . Well done :)
Kannan Avatar
July 31, 2017 at 2:12 AM
Thank you s so much Heidi... Glad you liked it...
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