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Finally It Rains

Cool breeze kisses my cheeks Clouds gather, spray drizzles Chill weather says something Hey, It's going to rain Standing on the terrace, I anticipate the rain. Clouds sprinkle droplets The floor is full of rain drops A big drop hits my head But I don't get hurt I count the raindrops 1,2,3...Drops keep on increasing I can hear several sounds when the raindrops hit trees, floors and the roof of my home Windows now, the refuge for wet birds Plants and trees in my garden, bath in the pure rain drops, laugh and sway gleefully, The birds and I enjoy the serene scene

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/1/2017 5:24:00 PM

what a lovely picture of the start of rain! Great job, Supraja.

Jan Allison

Date: 7/30/2017 5:37:00 PM

You make the rain sound so delightful Supraja - I love the fresh smell after a shower and then coolness of the air:-) A delightful poem, thanks for sharing:-) hugs Janxx

Supraja Kannan
Date: 7/31/2017 2:21:00 AM

Same here Jan... It's a beautiful refreshing smell... Thanks for stopping by... Glad you enjoyed it...

Thomas Hsi

Date: 7/30/2017 10:07:00 AM

"Cool breeze kisses my cheeks" --- beautiful words. A fine poem!

Supraja Kannan
Date: 7/31/2017 2:14:00 AM

Thank you so much for stopping by Thomas... I am glad you enjoyed it...

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 7/30/2017 8:29:00 AM

Nothing is more delightful that the coming of rain after a long anticipation! When it happens it is pure magic! A marvelous scenery my friend, Supraja!

Supraja Kannan
Date: 7/31/2017 2:13:00 AM

Exactly... So glad you enjoyed it... Thank you so much...

Heidi Sands

Date: 7/30/2017 7:52:00 AM

Very nice, I felt like I was right there, reading this . Well done :)

Supraja Kannan
Date: 7/31/2017 2:12:00 AM

Thank you s so much Heidi... Glad you liked it...