Finally Free

I want to dance!
Alone by the seaside
a shadow of darkness reflecting on the moon
I need to dance like Zorba
homeless hungry beggar, with hands up
heart beating to the full
love, last, pain, rejection, my companions
the vast horizon spectator,
all the suppressed feelings finally free
finally at the top!
past, present and future at a stop!
Then, at that very moment of pure instant freedom
as a lonely dancing figure
i wish to be gone
Copyright © | Year Posted 2006

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Agustin Avatar
July 13, 2024 at 12:10 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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February 18, 2016 at 1:47 AM
MARIA, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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November 30, 2015 at 12:28 PM
Maria, Enjoyed reading.... LUV **SKAT**
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