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Finally Free

I want to dance! Alone by the seaside a shadow of darkness reflecting on the moon I need to dance like Zorba homeless hungry beggar, with hands up heart beating to the full love, last, pain, rejection, my companions the vast horizon spectator, all the suppressed feelings finally free finally at the top! past, present and future at a stop! Then, at that very moment of pure instant freedom as a lonely dancing figure i wish to be gone

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Date: 7/13/2024 12:10:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 2/18/2016 1:47:00 AM
MARIA, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 11/30/2015 12:28:00 PM
Maria, Enjoyed reading.... LUV **SKAT**
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