Charles D. Hill Poet Free verse

Finally

Break it down

Break it all the way down

Break it down to the point of no return

Repeat

Repeat

Repeat

Don't stop, I can take it

Don't stop, I deserve it

Don't stop, it is what it is

Break it down

Break it down until there is nothing left

Now it's gone

Now I'm gone

Now I'm done

Finally

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Tristin Goodman January 21, 2015 at 12:06 PM A powerful write, and it hot home. I love it and I hope you keep up the good work. -Tristin Charles D. Hill September 22, 2018 at 2:43 AM Thank you! Glad to hear that. Let me know what you think of my new poem. Tristin Goodman January 21, 2015 at 12:06 PM hit* Sorry, my phone isn't the brightest.