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Finally

It's as if a million butterflies are all around me. As if all my worries have been lifted off the ground, As if life is actually on my side for once. As if gravity stopped working and suddenly, I'm weightless, under your spell. For once, my life isn't a lesson or a test, It's magical. Finally, Everything in my life is perfect. (Teenage girl: 1 Gravity: 23030)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 9/29/2011 9:35:00 AM
I am very happy to have been able to read your poetry today Sofia. I do not have a lot of words to comment on it but I want you to know I did read it. Every poem as with every poet has a different meaning and I do not wish to misinterpert your poetry. I do love reading poetry here and I get inspiration from others poetry which enables me to write new poetry myself. There are lots of wonderful people who give great comments here and I hope they all read your poetry and comment. Love, Carol
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