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Final Rest

You lived your lives the best you knew. Regrets were some but very few. Shared many years in love's embrace But early mistakes you couldn't erase. Your children scattered as families will do; One stayed nearby to see life through. You used to put us all to bed But now we've tucked you in instead. Your ashes lie side by side Where the wild things reside. The planes fly low overhead: A fitting tribute to our Ed. The view is Sound, the air salty With smells of seaweed and the sea. Memories are everywhere Of happy days without a care. Camping, hiking and swimming too; May it all come back to you. Rest peacefully there in God's grace In this, your final resting place. December 7, 2019

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Date: 10/25/2020 1:19:00 PM
Hey Jan... Hope you are well . Not seen you in a while
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Date: 3/22/2020 3:17:00 PM
This is lovely, Jan. A wonderful tribute. It reminds me of my mom and dad. The last two stanzas are awesome. ~Mark
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Date: 1/4/2020 1:52:00 AM
Wow! This is great ?? love how this feels as I read ? so many good lines. :)
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Date: 12/8/2019 2:40:00 PM
You captured the theme of this contest brilliantly... Great rhyme and flow to your poem..
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