Deborah Burch Poet Nonet

Final Peace

Final Peace

We were the last of a Peaceful Race
       And no match for the Evil Lord.
              Trapping us inside our ship,
                     He then reversed the valve
                            To the oxygen...
                                   Suffocating...
                                          Us...but...we...
                                                 Will                      have
          
                                                               Peace...



6/6/2012
deborah burch©

nonet

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Kash Poet June 9, 2012 at 12:46 AM Very good Nonet in the theme of the contest.

Robert Pettit June 7, 2012 at 10:57 PM Wow! This is an amazingly good write for a nonet poem.

Carol Sunshine Brown June 7, 2012 at 1:39 PM Enjoyed reading your poetry this afternoon Deborah. Hope you have a beautiful evening. Love, Carol

Jack Horne June 7, 2012 at 11:40 AM I love this clever and imaginative one, Deborah - I'm sure this will be a big winner

Anne-Lise Andresen June 7, 2012 at 12:27 AM Well done Deborah - good poem - wish you luck in contest. - Have a beautiful day to you. - oxox hug Anne-Lise Deborah Burch June 7, 2012 at 12:42 AM thank you dear Anne Lise! You are so special! btw, you do know you are " Anne Assam Tea" in my Peter the Pan story, right?...:-) love you, deb