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Final Parting

Here lies the body of a memorable man Unfortunately, he passed while on the can We found his body beside his throne And buried him here with this headstone.
Written August 28, 2022

Copyright © | Year Posted 2022


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Rico Leffanta
Date: 8/29/2022 11:13:00 AM
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There was a burly coal miner who died in Merthyr Tydfil (Wales) after taking a crap and pulling the chain which brought down the cistern above his head killing him whilst flushing him down the bowl. So you can thank him for cisterns being attached to the bowl instead of overhead! Aloha!
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Rico Leffanta
Date: 8/30/2022 11:13:00 AM
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Published in the South Wales Echo. Aloha!
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 8/29/2022 12:07:00 PM
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Where in the world did you find that tidbit of information, Rico?
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Michael Tor
Date: 8/28/2022 8:56:00 PM
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Milton now you got me thinking. I wonder how many have perished in this final act of release. LOL. My comment shouldn't be funny but I really can't change what occurs in life, and this humorous write of yours doesn't help. lol.
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 8/28/2022 9:00:00 PM
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Many, my friend, many. The most famous, of course, is Elvis Presley.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/28/2022 6:22:00 PM
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ha, ha, ha, ha, ha! Perfect, Milt! Was it north-south or east-west. Hope it wasn't east-west. Don't want his can facing Jerusalem! ~ Rabbi-T. Wolf
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 8/28/2022 7:03:00 PM
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Oh, definitely north-south, gw.
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Jeff Kyser
Date: 8/28/2022 6:22:00 PM
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… the grass right here, so green and lush was fertilized with his last flush, ha!
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 8/28/2022 7:04:00 PM
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That seems to be the case, Jeff. Oh dear, I hope he flushed before he fell over. May have been his last thoughtful act!
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Ilene Bauer
Date: 8/28/2022 4:48:00 PM
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Ha! Very funny, Milton!
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 8/28/2022 4:59:00 PM
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So glad you got a good laugh out of this one, Ilene. I did, too.

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