Final Notice

Crystal tears fell from the sky, 
over mountains and leaky valleys,
freeing echoes from another time and space...
through lacerated seams in Mother's wall;
funny how ancient wounds still bleeds.

Just the other day I caught sight of the shine,
finally looking through eyes that see, 
but time is not ours to replay...
too many sins to repay 
for casting stones at mother's house.

Provocative dreams fail me now, 
replaced by a myriad of faces
with jaded eyes and
mindless stares,
holding their eviction papers.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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De Beaulieu Avatar
June 24, 2019 at 2:42 PM
Hello Nicole williams, i find the ancient pass very interesting.So much happened way back then. have a nice day my friend.
Romios Avatar
June 4, 2019 at 5:41 AM
Hi..what a wonderful honor for you. Cheers, Panagiota
Hawley Avatar
May 28, 2019 at 11:53 AM
"funny how ancient wounds still bleeds..." and "too many sins to repay for casting stones at mother's house." Those lines makes a girl think! Great job.
Marcum Wong Avatar
April 27, 2019 at 10:30 PM
This is very lovely Nicole. Congratulations on having it featured. I can relate. : )
A   Avatar
January 31, 2015 at 10:02 AM
T. NICOLE , Congratulations on having your poem featured on the soups home page. ~Always & Forever~ LINDA
Jerden Avatar
January 30, 2015 at 8:40 AM
Welcome back... This is the first of your poems I have read. You certainly pulled a lot of my chains with this one, as I had a rocky relationship with my mother, who died before we could really talk as mature adults. Loved the "eviction papers", which I presume is a metaphor for death.
Sietesantos Avatar
May 13, 2014 at 9:01 PM
I love all your poetry - all very beautifully written - BRAVO!
Williams Avatar
May 20, 2014 at 12:42 PM
Pandita...so glad that you like them. Thank you!
Jordan Avatar
September 3, 2008 at 9:54 PM
Boy this poem sure speaks of a sad situation - Very well written and excellent perspective gives this poem the ability to allow the reader a sense of the despair being portrayed - God Bless
Williams Avatar
May 20, 2014 at 12:46 PM
I have just returned to poetrysoup after a few years of being away. However, I still wanted to thank you for your reply to this poem; I greatly appreciate your thoughts.
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