Final Footle

Reached end;
                    Bard-tend!
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Goldsmith Avatar
July 16, 2026 at 12:19 PM
Congratulations on your win. What a creative/fun write you have here.  Have a fun day writing away..........
Williams Avatar
July 17, 2026 at 8:31 PM
I appreciate your uplifting remarks, Paula! This one was fun to write, and I think most people got the "bar-tend" and "bard-tend" wordplay. Thanks, again. Have a great rest of your month! Blessings & very best, Bartholomew
Andresen Avatar
July 15, 2026 at 2:03 AM
- Congratulations on your win in the footle contest, Bartholomew :) - hugs
Williams Avatar
July 17, 2026 at 8:26 PM
Thank you kindly, Anne-Lise. It is great to hear from you! It has been a while (my fault; I sincerely apologize). Hugs right back to you. Blessings & very best, Bartholomew
Dietrich Avatar
July 15, 2026 at 12:27 AM
Back with congrats. Glad to see you on this list, my friend
Williams Avatar
July 17, 2026 at 8:28 PM
Thank you so very much, Andrea! (It does feel nice to be among those who placed.) I sincerely appreciate you kind comments and taking the time to read my poem. Blessings & very best, Bartholomew
Kendrick Avatar
January 6, 2026 at 4:18 PM
I got a chuckle out of this one with the play on words in such a short work. Thank you for sharing it with us, Bartholomew. I am glad that I chose it to read today. Sara K
Williams Avatar
January 6, 2026 at 5:01 PM
Sara, thank you for your visit today! I appreciate your nice words. You're right - a simple footle leave no room (syllables, words, lines, anything!) for any "fluff." I thought people would appreciate my pun about trying to be a poet in the end! You obviously got it, so thank you. Blessings and very best, Bartholomew
De Beaulieu Avatar
December 14, 2025 at 12:36 PM
Hello Bartholomew, I enjoyed this poem. /Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/
Williams Avatar
December 17, 2025 at 8:05 PM
Yes, we get some snow where I live, so I have had the whole winter experience. Very best to you, Darlene! Bartholomew
De Beaulieu Avatar
December 16, 2025 at 10:13 AM
Hello Bartholomew, Where do you live? Do you have winter?I was wondering if you didi. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/
Williams Avatar
December 15, 2025 at 6:43 PM
Thank you very much, Darlene, and I hope your week is going well. Stay warm! Very best, Bartholomew
Williams Avatar
December 11, 2025 at 9:28 AM
You're welcome, and thank you for stopping by, and for your kind comment, Andrea. I hope you have a great rest of your week! Bartholomew
Dietrich Avatar
December 9, 2025 at 11:55 AM
Nice one. Thanks for your recent visit to my poetry
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