Ankush Thakur Poet Free verse

:::::::Final Doom:::::::

My bantam cabin door scuttles
Light streaming ,trying to Breach in
Keeping my hand in its boulevard
Cutting up the gush of light
I came outside astound I am
Flying aloft the ground Rakishely
Maybe some vehicle
A new world an advanced domain
Frigid atmosphere adding smell of concealment
Glittering with neon lights
What a colossal look just miraculous
All hybrid race of improved DNA residents
Aura of the place attracting me
Attracting me to live here
To not to go to my world
Full of pedly issues , pedly form of mankind
Now i realise
Realise to fell like immortal
I am in the future, your future
It is my present
My machine is working
Seeing through the portals of time
Miles i have travelled
Miles still left to tell you

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Beata Agustin October 5, 2024 at 11:25 PM Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Poet Destroyer A February 19, 2016 at 9:56 PM nice to see this one again

Skat A January 1, 2016 at 10:57 AM happy new year

Skat A December 20, 2015 at 3:10 PM ANKUSH, stopped by to enjoy some of the best poems and poets of 2010 - 1015 :) Hope you are well enjoying what is left of 2015. Sending an early Christmas Message with Hugs. May you have a blessed Christmas and a happy New Year. Good luck in all you do during 2016. ~SKAT LOVE~

Poet Destroyer A July 26, 2015 at 10:21 PM Ankush, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Skat A July 25, 2015 at 2:59 PM Ankush, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT